- Introduce the main character as soon as possible.
- Raise a question to the readers.
- Make your reader feel sympathetic, or angry, or happy, or sad. Give them emotional satisfaction quickly.
- Get into characterization earlier.
- Set the main character a goal.
- Create a conflict that involves with the goal.
- Can other characters have goals?
- Can other characters bring emotions to the readers as well?
- Does the main character have to be introduce so quickly?